壽 Shòu: Longevity: Ten Miles of Peach Blossoms Fanfiction Ch 11

The stranger stepped out of the darkness, but darkness followed him, as he dressed in black head to toe. He took slow steps towards Bai Qian, as she focused her eyes to see who this mysterious man could be full. He walked towards her in a slow teasing pace until finally facedly face to face.

Bai Qian’s legs almost gave out on her when she saw Ye Hua’s face. What kind of twisted irony was this?

Ye Hua was the mysterious biter, friend, future husband and the person she’d planned to seduce to deflower her. Bai Qian could barely hold back her laughter. How could it be this easy? She didn’t even need to trick him or use an enchantment spell. Fate had handed him to her a present with a bow on top.

Bai Qian asked him teasingly, “Do you need an enchantment spell?”

“I don’t believe so,” Ye Hua responded confidently in his smooth voice.

The irony and humor of this situation were too much. Bai Qian turned her back towards Ye Hua to hide her silent laughter when she felt Ye Hua’s arms wrap around her waist from behind. He moved his one arm and pushed her hair to one side exposing her neck. Ye Hua buried his face into her hair and returned his arm around her waist and pulled her into him. Bai Qian felt Ye Hua’s full lips kiss the length of her neck and suck on her earlobe. His hands moved slowly and sensuous as they caressed her body over her dress. He touched and fondled her breasts over her clothes before sliding his hand inside the front of her dress through the plunging neckline. She felt his slim fingertip circled her nipple and rubbed it lightly between his thumb and second finger increasing the pressure. Bai Qian moaned softly. Ye Hua was a soft spoken, gentle person, so his aggressive sexual advances were surprising.

Bai Qian’s body responded to Ye Hua’s advances instinctual, but she started to feel unsure of her decision. She didn’t want to lose her virginity in such a casual way. Bai Qian wanted to fall in love, get married, and give her body to her husband on their first night as husband and wife. She wanted to experience passionate bodily pleasure with a husband who would give her unconditional love. Bai Qian was wondering if she was making the wrong decision when Mo Yuan’s words came back to haunt her. It re-enforced Bai Qian’s choice about why she’d planned and resorted to this scheme.

Bai Qian decided to throw her doubts and caution to the wind and finish what she started.

The goddess turned herself to face Ye Hua and kissed him passionately. Ye Hua returned her kiss while cradling her face in his hands. He pulled away and was studying her face when Ye Hua suddenly remembered a conversation he’d had with Uncle Lian Song.

When Ye Hua asked the third uncle what love felt like, his uncle replied that Ye Hua would see the face of his beloved everywhere and anywhere. After a while, other people would even start looking like the person he loved. Ye Hua couldn’t believe it, but this goddess looked just like Si Yin. She seemed like the female version of Si Yin.

Ye Hua’s uncle was right. Even now he saw Si Yin when he looked at this goddess.

The goddess reached to untie her dress when Ye Hua put his hand on top of hers and stopped her. Ye Hua’s expression of passion faded and his gaze softened. Ye Hua dropped his hands to his sides, took a step back and stiffened his posture. The goddess opened her eyes confused by Ye Hua’s lack of action. Ye Hua stared at the goddess’s face carefully and couldn’t believe it, but he still saw Si Yin. Ye Hua took both his hands and rubbed his eyes with open palms.

“Are you alright?” Bai Qian asked.

Ye Hua sighed deeply and said, “I’m sorry, but I can’t continue.”

Bai Qian stunned. She made a gesture towards her body and asked, “Am I not beautiful enough for you?”

“No. No. You are the most beautiful woman I’ve ever met in my life. You are exquisite,” Ye Hua replied apologetically.

“Then why did you stop?” Bai Qian asked honestly curious.

“I just realized my heart belongs to another. I came here hoping to see you again. I did. Our previous meeting was all I thought about for weeks, but my body refuses to follow where my heart doesn’t go,” Ye Hua explained softly.

“I’m offering my body to you freely, but you’re rejecting me because you don’t love me?” Bai Qian questioned.

“I’m sorry to have offended you, but I now know without a shred of doubt, that I love this person with all my heart,” Ye Hua replied.

Bai Qian was at a loss and just replied, “It must be an extraordinary person.”

Ye Hua nodded, “I’m sorry, but I’m grateful to you for making me realize something I’ve been fighting. I just need to be courageous.”

Ye Hua took Bai Qian’s hand and kissed it in a gentlemanly way before turning his back and walking away.

Bai Qian couldn’t understand what just happened. If it wasn’t shocking enough to finally discover Ye Hua was the mysterious biter, but the events that occurred tonight were unbelievable.

She had now been rejected two times, two days in a row, by two men, who happened to be identical twins. What kind of twisted, cruel, unjust fate was this? She walked back into Zhe Yan’s hut and drank wine until she felt nothing. Bai Qian didn’t know how she accomplished it, but she cloud jumped back to Kunlun in her intoxicated haze.

Mo Yuan was waiting for Si Yin’s return. He felt a profound sense of relief to see her. Si Yin returned red-faced and struggled to walk straight. She saw Mo Yuan, ignored him and kept walking.

“Seventeen?” Mo Yuan called, but she didn’t stop. He repeated her name with the same result. Mo Yuan finally called her by name.

“Bai Qian?”

That stopped her. Bai Qian turned her head and shoulders towards Mo Yuan without making eye contact.

“Where did you go tonight?” Mo Yuan inquired in a different tone than his usual. His tone sounded like a jealous lover.

Bai Qian let out a single laugh and replied loudly, “I was out getting experience.” She turned back to walk away.

“Are you planning on marrying Ye Hua?” Mo Yuan asked in the same tone as before.

Bai Qian suddenly stopped, turned around and walked up to Mo Yuan. They stood inches apart. Bai Qian’s angry expression was one Mo Yuan had never seen before.

“Am I marrying Ye Hua? Is that what you just asked me?” Bai Qian’s gaze intensified as she raised her voice slightly.

She took another step towards Mo Yuan. They stood so close their bodies almost made contact.

“As of this very moment, You Shifu and Crown Prince Ye Hua are the banes of my existence! So much so that I’m starting to wonder if you’re both a part of my heavenly trial. A test of consistent rejection, frustration, and aggravation!”

She walked away, and Mo Yuan realized she was no longer his little Seventeen but an outraged scorned woman.

To be continued………..

  16 comments for “壽 Shòu: Longevity: Ten Miles of Peach Blossoms Fanfiction Ch 11

  1. Bai qian
    July 3, 2017 at 2:53 am

    Tease !!! And the suspense continues .
    If you add li jing and bifang to the equation it will take even longer to solve . Lol
    I like it though . Thanks .


  2. mcsmacky
    July 3, 2017 at 5:16 am

    Oh I LIKE it! Thanks for putting this out so quickly. She’s had it with both of them. They are going to have to work so harrrrd…. I see a lot of atonement in those twins’ future.


  3. Vanessa Ly Kaiser
    July 3, 2017 at 7:05 am

    Pheewww, that was a close one, I’m so glad it didn’t happen that way, she would end up regretting it. YH is in for a roller coaster ride with this one. The attitude is sexy, I bet you MY is looking at her in a new light.


  4. Wood Dragon
    July 3, 2017 at 12:54 pm

    (Testing… Testing… did you change your web site? Seems it is a different method to comment now …. or maybe it is just that I am a noob…. 😛 )

    Anyway, thanks for updating so quickly! I am always looking forward to the next part of your story… finally, an AU with so many possibilities which I wish had been explored in the drama, especially the development and demonstration of MY’s feelings for BQ!

    I am also glad that BQ did not just start an intimate relationship, even though with YH, out of a mistaken sense of “gaining experience ” to please MY -whew!

    Now that the twins have offended the love of their lives… what cartwheels and somersaults will they need to perform, to get back on her good side??!

    By the way, I had always wondered… in your story, why did YH stop and disappear during their (YH/BQ) very first meeting?


    • mcsmacky
      July 3, 2017 at 2:03 pm

      That’s a good question! Why did he disappear?


      • July 3, 2017 at 4:43 pm

        He’s flustered completely. He’s the ultimate antisocial ice cube and he doesn’t know how to behave with someone not groveling at his feet.


      • Bai qian
        July 3, 2017 at 5:33 pm

        Lol that is true , he is soooo cold to every one else


      • 3310 paradise for fanfiction
        July 3, 2017 at 7:00 pm

        A block of ice.


    • Bai qian
      July 3, 2017 at 3:56 pm

      I though he was flustered with all the feelings , is there something more ?


      • July 3, 2017 at 4:43 pm

        You are 100& correct.


    • July 3, 2017 at 4:40 pm

      Because he was flustered. He’s used to everyone bowing down and here’s this person not treating him like the high and mighty Crown Prince he is. He doesn’t know how to take Si Yin.


      • Wood Dragon
        July 4, 2017 at 3:55 am

        O I C … Thanks for the clarification!


    • July 3, 2017 at 5:29 pm

      translation sent.


      • Wood Dragon
        July 4, 2017 at 3:54 am

        Thank you!


  5. Juls (Juliana 李)
    July 3, 2017 at 1:14 pm

    😊 finally its not clean anymore.
    Lucky i’m already not in my nieces house.
    So no underage around me.
    Can’t wait for chapter 12.
    BQ the most beautiful goddess got rejected 3 men consecutively lol


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