壽 Shòu: Longevity: Ten Miles of Peach Blossoms Fanfiction Ch 27

Bai Qian went to Celestial Heaven to see Ye Hua without prior notice. She entered through the front gates and escorted to Ye Hua’s residence at Xiwu Palace. After they announced her arrival, Bai Qian entered Ye Hua’s study to find he was not alone. An older man wearing a light colored robe sat fanning himself leisurely. He saw Bai Qian and his eyes flew open in shock. His mouth dropped, and he openly stared at her.

Ye Hua looked extremely surprised, got up and went to her.

“Is everything alright Qian Qian? Why didn’t you tell me you were coming?” Ye Hua asked in his soft voice, which was full of concern. The older man loudly cleared his throat. This sound made Ye Hua look back,

“This is my third uncle, Lian Song.”

Qian Qian bowed to the third prince as he looked her up and down, fully appreciating her beauty.

Ye Hua focused back to Qian Qian, reached for her hand and smiled.

Qian Qian looked over to Uncle Lian Song and said, “Excuse me,” then wordlessly grabbed Ye Hua by his face and kissed him deeply. Ye Hua dropped the brush he had been holding in his hand. He wrapped his arms around Qian Qian’s waist and pulled her closer.

Ye Hua lost in her kiss.

Qian Qian broke their kiss leaving Ye Hua lightheaded. She smiled at him and whispered so only Ye Hua could hear, “Yes, I will marry you. My feelings for you are as I’ve said all along. I felt a little something, but that’s to be expected since you are Shifu’s twin.” She then excused herself and left Ye Hua standing there dazed.

Uncle Lian Song was in shock as much as Ye Hua, but snapped out of it and stood beside Ye Hua and said, “Ye Hua, I think I’ve just fallen in love with your future Princess Consort.” Uncle Lian Song slapped Ye Hua hard on his back.

This slap woke Ye Hua from the spell of Qian Qian’s kiss. Ye Hua looked back to see his uncle glaring at him.

“You lucky brat!! You didn’t do her any justice when you described her to me. You damn lucky brat! She is the most beautiful woman I have ever seen in my life and to think you will have her for eternity. I’ve never hated you until this very moment, but I actually despise you, Ye Hua.” Uncle Lian Song closed his fan when he was done talking and hit Ye Hua again with his fan.

Uncle Lian Song sat down again still glaring at Ye Hua and said, “Well I see you seem to have cleared up her misunderstanding about you.”

Ye Hua shook his head and replied, “No. She still thinks I like men.”

Uncle Lian Song was outraged and jumped up to his feet. “You mean she kissed you like that thinking that you like men!? Uncle Lian Song opened his fan and started to fan himself fiercely. “If she kissed you like that thinking that you like men just imagine how she’ll kiss you once she knows the truth.” Uncle Lian Song gave Ye Hua a death stare.

“I hate you, Ye Hua,” Uncle Lian Song said as he walked out of Ye Hua’s study.

Ye Hua was confused by Qian Qian’s behavior. Was she doing this because she was angry at Mo Yuan? Ye Hua couldn’t take it any longer. It was time to speak to Mo Yuan directly regarding their desires and intentions with Qian Qian.

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When Ye Hua appeared at Kunlun Mountain, Mo Yuan knew the time had come. They were long overdue and in need of a talk in regards to Seventeen. Ye Hua knelt before Mo Yuan and silently waited for Mo Yuan to speak first.

Mo Yuan cleared his throat and took a sip of his tea before speaking saying, “It’s good that you’re here Ye Hua. We are long overdue for a talk.”

Ye Hua politely nodded and waited for Mo Yuan to continue.

“Even though Seventeen has been with me for thousands of years, I foolishly wasted precious time and realized my feelings for Seventeen recently. I love her. I’ve loved her for thousands of years and was blind to my feelings until now. I know you’re engaged to marry her, but I want her as my wife. I’m sorry Ye Hua. I’m sorry you’ve been dragged into this tangled situation,” Mo Yuan said softly.

Ye Hua nodded politely before he spoke, “Yes, I’m aware of your feeling for Qian Qian. I also know she has feelings for you. When I met Qian Qian when she was Si Yin, she was the first friend I’d ever had. Then, I fell in love with Si Yin regardless of the fact he was a man. I confessed my love to Si Yin knowing that it could end in doom. I knew my future as Heavenly Lord would be compromised. I knew my love wouldn’t be celebrated or be looked at favorably but I couldn’t help myself. I chose to risk it all for Si Yin. When I found out she was a woman, and I was overjoyed, but due to me confessing to Si Yin, Qian Qian thought I was homosexual.”

Ye Hua paused then continued. “I chose the most difficult road, and I would do it all again if I had to. I love her regardless of her gender, status, wealth, beauty and even with her misconception about me. I just love who she is,” Ye Hua ended and folded his hands over his lap.

Mo Yuan thought about what Ye Hua had just told him. Ye Hua had fallen in love with her when she as in her male appearance. This reason was why Seventeen had thought Ye Hua was gay. Now it made sense to Mo Yuan — Ye Hua had boldly chosen the roughest road and risked everything for his love. Mo Yuan finally understood Seventeen’s reasoning for wanting to marry Ye Hua. Not only was Ye Hua lonely, but he was also alone and she, his only source of happiness.

Mo Yuan asked himself if he would or could have fallen in love with Seventeen if she was truly a man, and the answer was no. Mo Yuan would have never fallen in love with a man. Nor would he have risked everything as Ye Hua had to obtain his love for another man.

It wasn’t about who loved her more or less, it was about who needed Seventeen more, and that person was Ye Hua, his lonely twin brother.

Mo Yuan didn’t embrace and nurtured his younger brother as he had planned to. Mo Yuan failed to shield Ye Hua from the strict ways of Heavenly Lord. Mo Yuan did nothing when Ye Hua was taken from his mother at birth. Mo Yuan who was sworn to protect all realms had protected everyone except the one who needed him the most, his twin brother Ye Hua. Seventeen had done it for him. At that moment, Mo Yuan felt incredibly grateful towards Seventeen for being there for Ye Hua.

Mo Yuan decided right then and there to withdraw from the race for Seventeen’s love. His heart ached, but he wasn’t alone as Ye Hua had been. Mo Yuan had been surrounded by loving disciples who worshipped him as their father. Seventeen had been one of those disciples. Mo Yuan had received her love and affection for thousands of years.

Mo Yuan would yield to Ye Hua because Mo Yuan loved Ye Hua too.

“Seventeen is a fortunate woman,” was all Mo Yuan could say.

Ye Hua smiled and replied, “No, I’m a fortunate man.”

Ye Hua’s love brought tears to Mo Yuan’s eyes. He knew his little Seventeen would be loved, protected, and cherished as he would have done himself.

After Ye Hua left, Mo Yuan went into seclusion until his wound healed. The pain of his broken heart.

To be continued………

  66 comments for “壽 Shòu: Longevity: Ten Miles of Peach Blossoms Fanfiction Ch 27

  1. July 13, 2017 at 4:57 pm

    Mo Yuan. You selfless noble man….My heart breaks for you. I’m sorry my noble twin. In my next FF perhaps you will get the girl. I love you Mo Yuan. T_T

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  2. Dillycat
    July 13, 2017 at 8:14 pm

    Thank you for the update. I am going back and forth like BQ too between YH and MQ! So confusing, can’t have one without the other.. ahhhh the torture!!

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    • July 13, 2017 at 8:22 pm

      The struggle is real but the end is near. Shou has 31 chapters and an epilogue.

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  3. Fan13
    July 13, 2017 at 9:04 pm

    MY an idiot here being self sacrifice…he/BQ can be miserable from his self seclusion if that’s the ending but to still drag YH into their mess…. and YH why why you settle for second best and substitute…she doesn’t love you as man/woman and you know it why fool yourself ..you deserve so much better…

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    • July 13, 2017 at 9:10 pm

      BQ still think’s Ye Hua prefers men.

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      • Fan13
        July 13, 2017 at 9:35 pm

        a misunderstanding mess …good thing we are almost near end…

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      • July 13, 2017 at 9:39 pm

        Yes. Everything will resolve itself.

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      • July 13, 2017 at 9:40 pm

        Are you coming back for Mount Song?

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      • Fan13
        July 13, 2017 at 9:48 pm

        depends… if its a spin off with other 3310 characters…probably wait till you finish and binge it like when i’m dramas watch haha…

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  4. Bai qian
    July 13, 2017 at 10:04 pm

    Well I am glad Yehua didn’t go through a lot of angst , just a little .
    But I have been through a lot phewwwew .
    I am happy if Yehua is happy 😊

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    • July 13, 2017 at 10:07 pm

      This FF was a bit of a rollercoaster ride, no?

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      • Bai qian
        July 13, 2017 at 10:07 pm

        Yeees 👍🏻

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      • July 13, 2017 at 10:08 pm

        Well buckle your seat belt there is more.

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      • Bai qian
        July 13, 2017 at 10:09 pm

        Thanks 4 , 4 chaps saved me at least 4 days of crying 😭

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      • July 13, 2017 at 10:10 pm

        My poor daring BQ. I’m the bad one.

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      • Bai qian
        July 13, 2017 at 10:13 pm

        Lol , when you have 2 great hunks and you are a beautiful goddess who had your way all life mind does become fickle and wants all . I see her POV .
        I am rationalising now .just that she is too old for this .

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      • July 13, 2017 at 10:15 pm

        She stayed at Kunlun too long. It stunted her emotional growth.

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      • Bai qian
        July 13, 2017 at 10:17 pm

        That always reminds my question , what do they exactly do for so many thousands of years . Other students did not even become high gods . All fox kids are high gods and did not attend skunkun school .
        Looks like just a nerdy school , we need all round devolopment fox school with fox king as teacher .

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      • Fan13
        July 13, 2017 at 10:19 pm

        I have the same question …hahaha.. what are they really learning over there…..?

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      • July 13, 2017 at 10:27 pm

        Fox King is the bomb!!

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      • Fan13
        July 13, 2017 at 10:17 pm

        ROFL…. epic failure by MY teaching or maybe its the students…hahaha…

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      • Bai qian
        July 13, 2017 at 10:34 pm

        All fail , repeat another 100000 years until you al become Little Rock’s like dijun

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      • Fan13
        July 13, 2017 at 10:43 pm

        OMG… ROFL…..i’m dying hahaha.. Little Rock Dijun….

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      • Bai qian
        July 13, 2017 at 10:14 pm

        Well brought the free tickets and signed up for this 🙃

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  5. ana978
    July 13, 2017 at 10:58 pm

    Thanks for the 4 chapters. Is it towards the end of the story? I feel bad for YH if BQ married him out of pity I don’t see a love between them. I feel there is no romance or love developing between them but friendship. At this point of the story BQ is still in love with MY and in a sexual intimate relationship with him might as well just stay with him since both are in love and YH is just a 3rd hand. I can’t imagine her jumping from one brother to another, imo it’s disgusting. YH it’s time for you to move on, you know she’s not in love with you and the person she loves is your own twin brother so be a man and let them be together. It’s not right to pursue someone who’s heart is taken.

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    • Bai qian
      July 13, 2017 at 11:05 pm

      In drama Yehua says even if there is something between MY and Qq he would still wait for her ever . I justcant get out of my mind , Yehua ,crying for 300 years without susu . I just can’t see him doing this again 🤦🏽‍♀️. If Yehua doesn’t mind second lead and waiting for her what can we do . That is Yehua 😘

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      • ana978
        July 13, 2017 at 11:13 pm

        That is true but in the drama and the book BQ is his wife and they are in love especially BQ fall twice for the same man in a different life time. We know that BQ doesn’t have romantic love for her Shifu both drama and the novel. She even stated that her Shifu is someone whom she respect as an elder or a father figure. In this fiction she does have romantic love for her Shifu and they are in love that’s why I feel YH is in the wrong to pursue her even though I adore YH and want him to have his happy ending but not with a woman who’s heart is taken.

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      • Bai qian
        July 13, 2017 at 11:23 pm

        I feel you , but I just can’t see Yehua crying 😢 He can have what ever he wants .

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      • ana978
        July 13, 2017 at 11:33 pm

        Lol, I’d rather see him cry than go through a lifetime of pain and regret than be with someone who will never share your feelings.

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      • Bai qian
        July 13, 2017 at 11:37 pm

        hmm love can’t be with it can’t be without it , will he get over it?
        may be he will after 100,000 years. another goddess will be born. hmm ok fine. let’s vote Yehua out of picture .

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      • Fan13
        July 13, 2017 at 11:47 pm

        he’s only 50K….i still have hope he will find his true love…take this as his love trial and passed it that he’s able to let go and stay noble and true to himself…

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      • ana978
        July 13, 2017 at 11:59 pm

        Agree, he’s still young and will his find his love one. Like you said Fan13, let’s this be his love trial to prepare him for the right woman, his one true love.

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      • Fan13
        July 14, 2017 at 12:08 am

        maybe he’ll meet his Susu in 100K and it’s not the tragic love/hate like the original novels…so much pain for them…

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      • ana978
        July 14, 2017 at 12:13 am

        That will be a nice twist. What I love about Su Su in the drama is that she a strong, compassionate woman. Once she has decided to let go, she will cut you off completely and never turn back.

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      • Fan13
        July 14, 2017 at 12:14 am

        it will be a ff inside a ff..hahahaha…lolz… it be like DJ/FJ shadow for SuSu to exist hahaha…

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      • Bai qian
        July 14, 2017 at 12:18 am

        I think the susu arc when they were together could be longer , it was soooo fast,we don’t even realise how deep they were in love until after they separate .

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      • Fan13
        July 14, 2017 at 12:26 am

        i’m the opposite i like they only show that little bit it actually more than the book already…it feel more impacting for me because so little time they get be together…so every moment together was very perish when she was up in heaven all alone and YH couldn’t do anything even though he tried his best he was so young and inexperience…

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      • Fan13
        July 14, 2017 at 12:19 am

        yep…that’s what i love about her too…. and when she jump… he was her one and only and also leaving behind her son…i feel she is BQ strongest character why it impact her so strongly in the drama/novel when she find out she is SuSu…

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      • July 14, 2017 at 12:29 am

        Funny you would mention Susu because Mount Song is about YH/SS/MY

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      • Bai qian
        July 14, 2017 at 12:31 am

        ss and My ???????

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      • July 14, 2017 at 12:32 am

        Yup

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      • Bai qian
        July 14, 2017 at 12:31 am

        Shenme??????

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      • July 14, 2017 at 12:32 am

        That’s what I said. Mount Song will have YH/SS/BQ/MY

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      • Bai qian
        July 14, 2017 at 12:33 am

        All right detox can wait

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      • July 14, 2017 at 12:34 am

        Here’s a hint. One of the peaks of Mount Song is Mount Junji. Does Mt Junji ring a bell?

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      • Bai qian
        July 14, 2017 at 12:34 am

        Okkkk susu and snake

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      • Fan13
        July 14, 2017 at 1:12 am

        i hope this SuSu is a separate person/body and not the one and same as BQ… 🙂

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      • July 14, 2017 at 2:12 am

        I guess you will have to wait and binge when it’s complete.

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      • Fan13
        July 14, 2017 at 2:43 am

        yep… can catch up on my Sound of Dessert c-novels reading…and waiting for the latest G. A. Aiken Dragon Kin series out 8/29 🙂 can’t wait…

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      • Fan13
        July 13, 2017 at 11:58 pm

        it’ll be tragic …to stay with someone who’s heart is with another…

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      • Bai qian
        July 13, 2017 at 11:27 pm

        please suggest a beautiful female goodness my Yehua will be happy with, and I will be satisfied. My mind will rest.

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      • Fan13
        July 13, 2017 at 11:40 pm

        I’m still hoping YH smart enough and let it go…and be strong like Susu and didn’t take the pity marriage … honestly i think he deserve soo much better than this BQ… someone who’s heart is not with someone else already…

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      • Emily
        July 14, 2017 at 10:06 am

        Ana98, it may be the case that in the drama BQ only feels fatherly love for shifu (or she thinks so), but YH always thougt she loves shifu romantically. That didn’t stop YH to sleep with her in the sea palace, nor did he judge about her offering to him that night (that wasn’t clear though in the drama but in the novel BQ offered to share a nice of intimacy as a thank you for the lamp) whilst he assumed she loves MY the most.

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      • July 14, 2017 at 10:41 pm

        Thank you Emily. True, YH didn’t hesitate to take BQ while thinking she was waiting for MY. In the drama, I actually found it kind of nervy of YH to chase her the way he did after meeting her again. After the whole eye taking/jumping off the terrace. I understand he suffered for 300 years yearning for her but he should have been honest from the start with BQ. That was when I realized, I hold grudges.

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    • Fan13
      July 13, 2017 at 11:29 pm

      i’m feeling exactly like you… YH is the undeserving 3rd wheel that innocently got tangle in this 2 mess…

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  6. Bai qian
    July 13, 2017 at 11:39 pm

    YeGenMO are polling lines still open? can we eliminate Yehua this week?

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    • Fan13
      July 13, 2017 at 11:52 pm

      rofl…. yeah i’m with you please get YH off this ship…..

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    • July 14, 2017 at 12:30 am

      Evil laugh mouhahaha

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  7. July 14, 2017 at 12:51 am

    So my precious peaches…….Who like to binge the remainder of Shou or would you rather get a little daily?

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    • Fan13
      July 14, 2017 at 12:58 am

      binge…. :).. we’re too invested….lolz…so we can start the Susu arc.. hahahaha..

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      • Bai qian
        July 14, 2017 at 1:13 am

        If there is happiness then slowly if Angst then binge .

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      • ana978
        July 14, 2017 at 1:35 am

        I would like to binge read Shou please.

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  8. July 14, 2017 at 2:14 am

    Everyone see you bright and early tomorrow. Eat a good breakfast and prepare yourself for the completion of Shou.

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  9. Bai qian
    July 14, 2017 at 2:15 am

    Early weekend

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  10. urawga
    July 14, 2017 at 10:39 am

    If MY really decides to give up on BQ, then he doesn’t deserve her. BQ is a woman with her own rights and he has no ability to choose BY HIMSELF. He’s both too weak and arrogant to choose to fight for her 😅😅. Man, where did his strength go??

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    • Bai qian
      July 14, 2017 at 1:56 pm

      Moyuan is reminded of his fathers word to take care of his brother , so it is also vbeoz he loves a Yehua . I agree Bq isn’t a toy. But every one here thinks they are noble and ready to scarifice like bq also .🤔

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