嵩山 Mount Song: Ten Miles of Peach Blossoms Fanfiction Ch 16

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Ch 16

Bai Qian

Bai Qian heard her father’s footsteps coming towards her. Even without her sight, Bai Qian knew her father was visually examining her, and she heard the anger in his voice.

“Bai Qian, this is not Kunlun Mountain. What are you doing here and why are you unable to see again?”

Bai Qian felt her father’s warm hands held her face tenderly as he carefully studied her face. She moved and released a small moan from the pain of her recent miscarriage.

The Fox King placed his hand lightly on his daughter’s stomach, closed his eyes and used his spiritual aura. He sighed deeply, held his daughter and said, overcome with deep sorrow, “You’ve lost a child. Please tell me it was Mo Yuan’s, not Ye Hua’s.” The Fox King sighed heartbrokenly and asked, “My precious child, what have you done to yourself?”

Bai Qian’s lips trembled as she, for the first time, revealed every detail of her horrific ordeal, starting from her mortal life to her current situation. Bai Qian told her father everything that she’d kept hidden and buried deep inside herself for over three hundred years. She told him of her once unconditional love for Ye Hua, his betrayal, the humiliation she’d endured, and her current plan for vengeance. Bai Qian heard her father cry as he held her tightly, rocking her back and forth.

The Fox King was devastated. He had known very little of his daughter’s heavenly trial since Bai Qian had remained secretive and never told anyone.

“Father, SuSu won’t leave me alone,” Bai Qian cried. “I hear her whispers in my ears. I have only one more thing to do, and then I will be done. SuSu promised to leave me in peace. Father, I’m so close to the end. Help me,” Bai Qian pleaded to her father.

The Fox King had failed to recognize the level of his daughter’s diseased mind from her horrible ordeal. He had hoped Mo Yuan could reverse the damage inside her heart, but he had been wrong. Bai Qian had been silently suffering alone for over three hundred years, still haunted by her terrifying memories from her heavenly trial.

The Fox King decided he would do whatever he needed to do to save what was left of his precious, only daughter, even if it meant declaring war on the Celestials.

When Ye Hua tried to enter Bai Qian’s room, the Fox King demanded Ye Hua leave. He explicitly told Ye Hua that the marriage Ye Hua desired would never happen while he, Bai Qian’s father, was still alive. The Fox King blamed Ye Hua and told Ye Hua that he was still undeserving of his daughter as he’d said three hundred years ago.

Ye Hua’s inability to control his side consort had caused Bai Qian not only to lose her sight again but miscarry a child that had barely begun to grow inside her body.

Ye Hua dropped to his knees and explained to the Fox King that he couldn’t live without Bai Qian and that she was his reason for living. Ye Hua pleaded in earnest, but the Fox King was unconvinced. The Fox King informed Ye Hua that he would be taking Bai Qian home after her eyes were returned.

The Fox King stated that he would force feed her amnesia potion if he had to so she would forget Ye Hua forever. He also warned Ye Hua never to step foot in Qing Qiu and that he would handsomely reward the one who killed Ye Hua if he appeared in any of his realms.

The Fox King also suggested Ye Hua drink from the River of Oblivion if he couldn’t live without Bai Qian because the Fox King would never allow them to be together again. The Fox King said that he would rather take Bai Qian’s life with his own hands than allow her to stay with Ye Hua.

Ye Hua’s mother then came to appeal for her son. Consort Le Xu welcomed the Fox King and showed concern for Bai Qian’s injured eyes as well as her loss of Ye Hua’s child. Bai Zhi, the Fox King, reminded Ye Hua’s mother that he was the King of Qing Qiu and Bai Qian was a Queen. The Nine-Tailed Fox Tribe was one of the oldest immortal clans, which had not only survived but continued to thrive to become the wealthiest and most powerful of all the immortal clans. He demanded she follows protocol and greets both himself and Bai Qian appropriately.

Consort Le Xu was shocked and dumbfounded as she reminded the Fox King that they would soon be in-laws. Ye Hua’s mother told the Fox King that Ye Hua had endured three years of lightning strike punishment for his daughter, but the Fox King scoffed and replied that Ye Hua deserved his punishment for marrying Bai Qian in the mortal realm under pretenses.

He blamed Ye Hua for his inability to protect his vulnerable wife from calamity.

He instructed Consort Le Xu to greet himself and Bai Qian properly and stand on ceremony, as per the customs of Qing Qiu. The Fox King reprimanded Consort Le Xu until she kowtowed three times to both the Fox King and Bai Qian since she held the lowest status in the room. The Fox King watched Ye Hua’s mother bow on her knees before his daughter, Bai Qian and felt some of his resentment diminish.

When he’d heard that Consort Le Xu had forced Bai Qian to sit at her feet during her heavenly trial, he’d barely been able to contain himself from rushing into her chamber and killing her instantly.

The Fox King then went to Heavenly Lord to settle the debt owed to his daughter.

This meeting was the first time they’d met since the Fox King’s threat to start a war with the Celestials when he had canceled Bai Qian’s engagement to Ye Hua. The Fox King blamed Heavenly Lord personally for Bai Qian’s undeserved sufferings. He informed a mortified Heavenly Lord that Bai Qian had been the mortal SuSu during her heavenly trial and demanded restitution for her unjust treatment. Since Ye Hua’s side consort Su Jin had stolen Bai Qian’s eyes, attempted to kill Bai Qian and caused the death of her unborn child, the Fox King demanded Su Jin return Bai Qian’s eyes and repay the loss of Bai Qian’s dead child with her life.

The Fox King suggested strongly under a lightly veiled threat that Heavenly Lord should abdicate to Ye Hua and step down from his position as Heavenly Lord. He stated that Heavenly Lord was unfit to hold such a position of power if he was using it for corruption and evil deeds. The Fox King said he would call a meeting of all the realms to discuss Heavenly Lord’s past deeds and his involvement in the Fox King’s daughter, High Goddess, Bai Qian, losing her sight.

High God, Bai Zhi, the Fox King, would bring up Bai Qian’s attempt to jump from Zhuxian Terrace due to Su Jin’s falsities which were supported by Heavenly Lord himself. Bai Zhi, the Fox King, didn’t mask his discontent when he stated that he would declare war on the Celestials, with the support of the other realms that were indebted to him for past favors or financial help.

The Fox King promised to collect all his debts to form an army to annihilate the Celestial Clan and wipe out their existence.

Heavenly Lord abdicated the following day and Ye Hua the Crown Prince became the new Heavenly Lord.

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Ye Hua

Since the arrival of Qian Qian’s father, the Fox King, Ye Hua hadn’t been able to see Qian Qian. High God Bai Zhi, the Fox King, told Ye Hua that he would never allow Qian Qian to stay with him and that he would personally force feed her amnesia potion to forget Ye Hua and their son A-Li.

Ye Hua recalled the feel of Qian Qian’s warm embrace, the scent of her sweet fragrance, and cried himself to sleep nightly. He had regained Qian Qian’s love briefly enough to feel the profound absence of it after losing her again. Ye Hua’s beautiful, blissful love had been a short dream that had come to a tragic end again.

Ye Hua pleaded with the Fox King. Ye Hua told him that Qian Qian was his life and that he would die without her. The Fox King said to Ye Hua that he should drink from the River of Oblivion and forget Qian Qian because he would never allow them to be together again.

Losing Qian Qian for the second time was unbearable. Ye Hua couldn’t endure the pain of Qian Qian’s void again. Ye Hua’s pain was overwhelming, and he was unable to do anything due to his consuming grief. A-Li was still unaware that he would be losing his mother again and asked to visit her daily.

Ye Hua wondered if it would have been easier if he hadn’t found Qian Qian again because his new fresh memories of his Qian Qian and her tender love replayed painfully in his mind always.

The day the Fox King retrieved Qian Qian’s eyes in her stead, he requested a dull spoon instead of a sharp dagger. Su Jin’s screams echoed throughout Celestial Heaven as the Fox King slowly dug out his daughter’s eyes that should have never in Su Jin’s sockets from the start.

Afterward, Su Jin was banished from Celestial Heaven and reincarnated into the form of a cow for her crimes. Su Jin was reborn as a beast of burden before she slaughtered and eaten in the mortal realm. Su Jin’s sentence was that she would have to repeat this vicious cycle for eternity.

Ye Hua was still not allowed to see Qian Qian since the day of the incident at Zhuxian Terrace. The Fox King had his guards standing outside the Hall of Beautiful Youth. Ye Hua heard from Nai Nai that High God Zhe Yan, the Medicine God, had come to Celestial Heaven personally to remove the foul aura from Qian Qian’s eyes before returning them to her. Qian Qian had finally recovered her eyes that Ye Hua’s had taken with his own hands.

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Bai Qian

The day she was due to leave Celestial Heaven, Bai Qian pleaded with her father that she wanted to see her son A- Li one last time before her departure. With a convincing smile on her face, Bai Qian promised her father that she would be following him shortly. After the Fox King and his guards left her alone in the Hall of Beautiful Youth, she wrote Ye Hua a letter, requested Nai Nai deliver it to Ye Hua and went to fulfill SuSu’s last request.

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Ye Hua

Ye Hua knew Qian Qian was leaving Celestial Heaven. He was unable to see her one last time, so when Nai Nai brought him a letter from Qian Qian, he was impatient to read its content. But what he read shattered his soul into a million pieces.

 

Ye Hua,

We are finally debt free and able to release each other truly. Forgive me as I will forgive you for our past mistakes. Please take care of A-Li, forget me and know my love for you was true even until this very moment. I’ve come to realize that I still loved you. I’m sorry for my bad deeds but SuSu demanded it of me, and I’m finally going to be free of her. I am going to finish what she began.

 

Ye Hua felt the forewarning feeling that he’d experienced before and instinctively knew where Qian Qian was—she was at Zhuxian Terrace. Ye Hua rushed to her in a panic, but he was too late. Ye Hua saw Qian Qian standing on the punishment platform. She turned back, looked at Ye Hua, smiled at him lovingly, mouthed that she loved him, and closed her eyes before she successfully jumped off the place SuSu had failed to three hundred years ago.

 

to be continued……….

 

  32 comments for “嵩山 Mount Song: Ten Miles of Peach Blossoms Fanfiction Ch 16

  1. Emily
    August 9, 2017 at 9:04 pm

    Such an emotional chapter… BQ is the luckiest girl in the world to have such a loving father! It was so beautiful to read how BQ was finally able to tell her father what has happened. She has finally let go and found peace again. She then realizes that she still loved YH… I feel really sorry for him that he has lost her and their child… So much that I totally forgot about MY.

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    • pagaspas11
      August 9, 2017 at 9:33 pm

      your wrote down everything I wanted to say too!

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      • Emily
        August 9, 2017 at 9:43 pm

        If I think about it again… It’s really so sad she lost their child and then realizing she still loves him😦

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    • JoAnna Glasby
      August 9, 2017 at 10:51 pm

      The fox emperor absolutely slated in this chapter. I have never been so happy as when he dug out SJ eyes with that dull spoon 🥄

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  2. Jennifer Lee
    August 9, 2017 at 9:19 pm

    Wait what?! Nooo! What about Mo Yuan?? You’re too cruel! 😭😭 Can she just drink the amnesia potion now and be happy with MY?? We just want them to be happy together!

    Thanks for the update! Looking forward for the next chapter!!

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    • Emily
      August 9, 2017 at 9:48 pm

      Perhaps she has lost her memories after jumping (in the movie version that was the case, no amnesia potion). She’s then back to her old happy self and in love with MY. Forgetting she has a child and and that her 2nd child died…

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      • Jennifer Lee
        August 9, 2017 at 10:17 pm

        I haven’t watched the movie yet. Sadly, I can’t seem to find a link anywhere.

        I feel really devastated for everyone in this story. No one wins in this scenario. My only consolation is that we’re not finished with the story yet. I never know what to expect until a new update. 😂

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      • anik
        August 10, 2017 at 5:28 pm

        This version is the best I found. ^^ http://bit.ly/2wLVeep

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      • Jennifer Lee
        August 10, 2017 at 5:35 pm

        OMG! THANK YOU!!

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      • Jennifer Lee
        August 10, 2017 at 7:18 pm

        Just finished the movie. Maybe it’s because we watched the show for, but the movie felt very rushed and they barely explained anything. I think someone mentioned that the movie was like a summary of the show and I agree. I’m going to just keep rewatching the show then. 😂😂

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      • anik
        August 11, 2017 at 1:24 am

        Only those who watched drama or read the novel will understand the plotline. I quite like CGI scenes though, except Qing Qiu, it feels too much like a jungle than fairyland for me. YY is not so bad as a young adult but LYF acting isn’t quite up there.

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      • August 10, 2017 at 8:38 pm

        Thank you.

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      • August 10, 2017 at 8:57 pm

        Not to compare but……YY is no MC. The story is too complex to be condensed into a movie. IMO.

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      • Emily
        August 10, 2017 at 8:58 pm

        Thx!!

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      • August 10, 2017 at 9:43 pm

        Even in the movie, I still cried when SuSu had her eyes taken.

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  3. Emily
    August 9, 2017 at 9:52 pm

    Bai Qian, you there? How are you holding on? Do we need to call the paramedics for you?

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    • August 10, 2017 at 1:04 am

      I was wondering the same thing all day!! Poor BQ

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  4. Bai qian
    August 9, 2017 at 10:07 pm

    No words, I am hit in stomach. Can’t talk for a while 😨

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  5. Bai qian
    August 9, 2017 at 10:15 pm

    Ok I can breathe now , why why zuxian tai
    Whyyy she know she will
    Not die so why inflict pain .
    Why . I need to breathe gain

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  6. Bai qian
    August 9, 2017 at 10:16 pm

    This more painful then susu arc in drama .
    Well written , same author writing romantic funny, erotica , dark horrifying soo many style s . Very versatile Yegenmo

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  7. JoAnna Glasby
    August 9, 2017 at 10:49 pm

    This was both satisfying and painful 😖. I knew her mind wouldn’t be able to handle everything she did, I just knew it. So sad 😭 hopefully YH will catch her and be able to bring her out of there and then Bai Zhi will either het her the High god form of therapy or make her drink that potion! Thank so much for the chapter this is exactly what I thought the trial should have been like. The only difference is I wish Heavenly lord would be reincarnated as a woman and forced to endure exactly what BQ for eternity every single time the same thing

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  8. Bai qian
    August 9, 2017 at 11:03 pm

    I vote for Yehua becoming high god as this was a trial for Yehua too

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    • JoAnna Glasby
      August 9, 2017 at 11:19 pm

      I though he already was a high god?

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      • Jennifer Lee
        August 9, 2017 at 11:27 pm

        I think Yehua is just a high immortal. The only other High Gods in the books were Bai Qian, her brothers and father, Zhe Yan, Mo Yuan and Dong Hua. If you’re not from an old family/clan most don’t ascend to High Gods status.

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      • Bai qian
        August 9, 2017 at 11:49 pm

        He is a high immortal at 20k but not high god yet,

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  9. Suzan Stevens
    August 10, 2017 at 4:24 am

    Holy crapoli! Wow, Father Fox rocks! That has to be your best chapter yet! Im surprised Mo Yuan wasnt there too, though glad he wasnt, it would have been too sad. And kicking that sky lord off the throne, they should have done that in the drama, I always thought he got away with murder. As for Ye Huas mother, yeah, she got what she deserved…. and Su Jin the fugly mutt cow, defefinitly got what she deserved ……

    sigh…. I got my fix for the day, thank you ma’m… off for lunch break 😀

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    • JoAnna Glasby
      August 10, 2017 at 7:54 am

      I always thought Le Xun (YH mother) and heavenly lord got off to lightly in the drama as well. Especially with the self righteous way LX snapped at BQ when she wanted to keep YH body

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      • August 10, 2017 at 8:19 am

        I hated YH’s mom. Self righteous beouch!!

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      • Suzan Stevens
        August 10, 2017 at 8:51 am

        Yeah me too… just as bad as Su Jin

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      • JoAnna Glasby
        August 10, 2017 at 5:30 pm

        IKR!? She was the one who originally encouraged SJ in her self delusion. Even if her tribe was still alive YH would not have wanted her. There are other tribes like hers with princesses eligible to be YH consort but he remained unmarried but SJ never thought of that because Le Xun thought she would make a good wife. I know LX never got to see YH til he was 20,000 years old but you gonna tell me those gossiping maids in the palace never repotto her everything about YH? Including his dislike/indifference to SJ?

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  10. August 10, 2017 at 9:34 pm

    I will say one good thing about the movie…the sex scene after YH’s is injured was beautifully filmed. Now of MC and YM did that scene….my ovaries would have exploded.

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  11. Lainey
    August 11, 2017 at 8:42 am

    So Susu’s u filled wish was to jump into the Z.Terrace? Wow! What a way to go!! Feel a little bit sorry for her… wonder what the Fox King’s family will do. What happened to Mo Yuan & his disciples??

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