崑崙山 Kunlun Mountain: Ten Miles of Peach Blossoms Fanfiction Ch 29


SuSu left the room when Mo Yuan entered as usual. She’d stopped sleeping with him and avoided being alone with him. But SuSu was unaware, Mo Yuan followed her all night, every night from a distance unknown to her.

From behind, Mo Yuan swiftly caught SuSu, when her body lurched forward as her water broke. She cried out from her contraction when he carried her back to bed.

SuSu’s dress was cold and drenched with bloodstained water. Her breathing in short, uneven, sharp inhales and exhales.

Mo Yuan’s expression one of worry. He asked, “How close are your contractions coming?”

SuSu whimpered, “I don’t…know.” and suddenly cried out from another contraction.

Mo Yuan whispered, “SuSu, I’m getting Zhe Yan. I’ll be right back. Don’t move. Please!”

Mo Yuan left and instructed one of his disciples to find and bring Zhe Yan to Kunlun Mountain because SuSu was in labor.

SuSu labored intensely the first day. She cried out and screamed in pain with every contraction. SuSu didn’t want Mo Yuan around. The second day, SuSu’s arduous labor continued, but she was fragile, exhausted and lacked the energy to cry out. She didn’t have the strength to scream. She fell asleep in-between her painful contractions.

SuSu’s cervix was fully dilated, but there wasn’t any sight of the baby crowning. Instead, she profusely bled both days.

On the third day, she faded in and out of consciousness. SuSu’s state compromised and wavered due to her weeks of self-starvation before going into labor. When she came back around, she asked for Ye Hua again. SuSu ignored Mo Yuan when he tried to comfort her. She closed her eyes, weakly gasped with uneven exhales while tears ran down her face.

Immediately, Ye Hua came to her and looked terrified. SuSu was ghostly white. Her hair was soaking wet and stuck to her pale face. SuSu’s breathing labored and shallow. She went in and out of state of awareness. Ye Hua was shocked by the vast amount of blood that was everywhere.

SuSu slowly opened her eyes and smiled at Ye Hua. She whimpered in a light voice, “Ye Hua, I don’t think I’ll be able to leave with you. I don’t think I’m going to make it. I’m so tired that I only want to close my eyes and sleep…forever.”

Ye Hua tenderly held SuSu’s hand and whispered, “You’ll be alright. SuSu, I love you. Once you have the baby, we can leave and be happy together.”

Ye Hua pressed his lips to SuSu’s hand, when she closed her eyes and faded back into sleep.

Mo Yuan walked in and saw Ye Hua kissing SuSu’s hand. He’d heard most of their conversation. Mo Yuan asked, “Ye Hua, what is SuSu talking about? Where would she go? Why would she leave with you?”

Ye Hua turned to Mo Yuan angrily, scowled as he hissed, “SuSu knows you never loved her. She feels used by you. SuSu wants to live with me after she has the child. She doesn’t want to vanish, and I don’t want her to either. I love SuSu.”

Mo Yuan attempted to control his anger, “Ye Hua, SuSu is Seventeen. She is not a separate person. Is this why she’s been so upset? What did you say to her?”

Ye Hua shouted “I gave you Qian Qian! You and she will have eternity. Why can’t I have SuSu until her natural death? She’s only experienced pain, suffering, and loneliness. She carried your child, can’t you let her live just a bit longer? 60 years is nothing in an immortal terms!”

Mo Yuan was furious. His voice came out in a low growl, “Did you put crazy ideas into SuSu’s head? Is that why she stopped eating and allowed her body to become this damaged? SuSu and Seventeen are one! Why can’t anyone understand this? Has everyone lost their minds? If Seventeen lives so will SuSu. They are halves to a single individual!”

Zhe Yan’s voice came from behind, “Everyone need to stop arguing. The mortal is dying. You’re wasting precious time. Her heart can’t take much more of this. If we don’t take the baby out, the baby is also going to die!”

Zhe Yan glanced at SuSu and added, “Mo Yuan, the baby’s breech. She has been in labor too long, if this continues they’ll both die. She’s too weak to deliver naturally, and it’s becoming dangerous for the baby. I must cut her open and take the child out before it’s too late.”

Mo Yuan’s voice tensed, “SuSu will die if you do that, Zhe Yan. Isn’t there any other options?”

“Mo Yuan, the baby will die inside the mortal’s body! SuSu’s death is an interim before Xiao Wu returns to immortality. But we must remove the child from the mortal’s body before she dies. If SuSu dies and the baby is still inside her, your child will also die.” Zhe Yan’s tone conveyed his urgency.

Ye Hua screamed “You can’t cut SuSu! Why does she have to die for Mo Yuan’s child? Is the baby more important than SuSu? No, it’s not! SuSu’s life is more important than the baby’s!”

“Ye Hua, SuSu is Xiao Wu! If we do nothing, Xiao Wu will return to a dead child. Her baby!” Shouted Zhe Yan.

Ye Hua was inconsolable and unconvinced. He was furious as he yelled, “SuSu is not Qian Qian! She is a mortal woman! She doesn’t look identical to Qian Qian, only similar. They are two different people! Two separate bodies! You can’t kill SuSu just to get Qian Qian back! It’s an injustice. SuSu has known nothing but suffering. Why must she die? It’s unfair to SuSu!”

“Zhe…Yan,” SuSu’s breath short and shallow, “take…the baby out before……it’s too late.” SuSu whimpered as another contraction overcame her.

“Please…save the ba…baby…” SuSu panted and struggled to breathe. She added, “I know…I’m…dy…dying.” SuSu cried as she pleaded to Zhe Yan. “Please, save…my child.”

Gently, Zhe Yan explained, “I’ll do it SuSu, but I can’t use any spells to take your pain away because it’s too dangerous. Your body can’t endure much more of this. I’m going to have to cut you, and you’ll feel everything.”

SuSu faintly nodded ‘yes’, as Zhe Yan pushed both Mo Yuan and Ye Hua out of the room, and closed the door.

Nervous stress and tension made time crawl at a snail’s pace. Mo Yuan and Ye Hua’s expressions were of fear and concern, as they waited anxiously outside the bedroom door. SuSu’s piercing screams followed a long-drawn nerve-wracking silence. Suddenly, the sharp first cry of the newborn child, filled the air as the mortal, SuSu’s and Immortal High God Mo Yuan’s baby took its first breath of air.

Zhe Yan came out with a bundle in his arms and exclaimed happily, “Mo Yuan, it’s a boy! You’re a father!”

Mo Yuan cried tears of joy.

Ye Hua ran back to SuSu. Her complexion waxen, pale and her lips colorless due to excessive blood loss. Her hair drenched and plastered to her face. SuSu’s breathing broken, labored, shallow and uneven.

SuSu was dying.

She smiled and whispered with broken, ragged words, “Ye Hua, thank you…for saving me on Mo…Mount Junji. I would have died…without…you. I’m sorry…I couldn’t be with you. Thank you for trying to…save…my life. Where…is Mo Yuan?”

Mo Yuan was beside SuSu in an instant. He went to her, smiled lovingly and said, “SuSu, he’s beautiful. Our son is perfect.”

SuSu smiled and whispered faintly, panting in-between paused words, “Mo Yuan, I’ve……fulfilled my…sole purpose. I…may not have…your…love, but I had…the honor of…carrying and…giving you a child……I’m…nothing but a name…nameless, unimportant mortal…but I did…something grand……in my short life. I gave birth…to……the first son……for the God of…Wa…War.”

Mo Yuan’s eyes watered as he said, “SuSu, you’re wrong. I do love you, and I’ll continue to do so. I’ve always loved only you. You’re not going anywhere. You’re transitioning back to immortality. You’re coming home.”

SuSu smiled softly, and tears ran freely down the sides of her face. Her frail, cold hand lovingly caressed Mo Yuan’s cheek and said in her final breaths, “I lo…love you. You were……the only ma…man in my life. Thank you…for saying you love me…but your Sev…en…Seventeen will be back…so…I kno…know…you’ll be…happy……”

Suddenly, SuSu’s hand lifelessly dropped from Mo Yuan’s cheek, and onto the bed. She was still smiling, when she died with her adoring gaze fixed on his face.

Ye Hua let out a raspy, choked sob he’d been holding back. Tears filled his eyes and ran down his face. He said nothing to anyone and left Kunlun Mountain.

SuSu, the mortal who carried Mo Yuan’s child was dead.

To be continued…..

  16 comments for “崑崙山 Kunlun Mountain: Ten Miles of Peach Blossoms Fanfiction Ch 29

  1. Quee Luan Png
    September 28, 2017 at 1:53 am

    This chapter is so sad. I still cried for SuSu even though SuSu & Seventeen is the same person. Hope its happy days ahead for MY & Seventeen & many more babies for them.


    • September 28, 2017 at 2:17 am

      I cried writing it.


      • Ana Korizma
        September 28, 2017 at 8:22 pm

        Seeing a fighter furious husband MY against the selfish YH was the icing on the cake though. I cried so much for the rest, but it made me happy that SuSu died with love for our Shifu. Like Quee, I also hope for a bigger family and happiness for MY & 17/BQ.


  2. Emily
    September 28, 2017 at 6:39 am

    Aaaaaaaaahh… such emotional chapter. It is a strange feeling. I somehow also see them as a separate person.


    • September 28, 2017 at 7:03 am

      Me too hence a problem writing the next chapter…damn it.


      • Emily
        September 28, 2017 at 11:56 am

        Oh noooo… i didn’t?! I want a HE. A bit angst is OK, but not too much. I love shifu!


      • Ana Korizma
        September 28, 2017 at 8:27 pm

        I hope we have a happy end, it’s been a 1000% emo drive. The way you said it Em and I understood it, I think there could be splitting in 2 bodies? With our Unni, all’s possible. 😀


    • Ana Korizma
      September 28, 2017 at 8:25 pm

      It was deeply emotional, a true roller-coaster. But I’m happy that SuSu stayed Mo Yuan’s till the end. I hope she keeps her memories, so she can kick butt from YH for trying to take her away, and Qing Cang for making her a mortal. Those two really need to feel Bai Qian’s rage. Su Su was too weak in the drama, so I love her here.


  3. JoAnna J
    September 28, 2017 at 10:00 am

    I seem to be having the opposite reaction of everyone else. I’m camp MY on this SuSu is just an aspect of BQ personality when She gets her memories back she will remember what happened as a mortal as long as she doesn’t drink Zhe Yans medicine or oblivion water. Doesn’t YH understand that when BQ gets her memories back she will probably hate him for confusing the situation? Oh well this can be a heavenly trial for both of them to ascend I guess


  4. September 28, 2017 at 3:48 pm

    If you treat 17 and SuSu as separate people, then Mo Yuan cheated on 17 with SuSu. I personally feel that SuSu and 17 were one and the same. You actually did a good job of remaining faithful to 17’s personality even when she was SuSu – sassy, stubborn, and very passionate. The drama failed in that it made SuSu too docile and weak for the better part of her story arc. Only at the end of her arc, when she was determined to cut off ties with Ye Hua and jumped off Zhuxian Terrace did her strong will shine through.

    I vote for 17 to retain SuSu’s memories. She will be a stronger character with her experiences/memories intact so that her character development can move forward in the plot.


    • September 28, 2017 at 6:30 pm

      I hated docile SS. It didn’t make sense for 17/BQ to lose her essential personality due to becoming a mortal. My reason why both Mount Song and Kunlun Mountain shows a strong SuSu.


      • September 28, 2017 at 7:52 pm


        Also, 17 needs to remember her trials and tribulations as SuSu so that she can go back and kick Qing Cang ‘ s rear end for sending her to the mortal realm to suffer. I totally believe in not forgetting and not forgiving until retribution has been served.


      • Ana Korizma
        September 28, 2017 at 8:18 pm

        That too lol. That would be epic butt kick!


      • Ana Korizma
        September 28, 2017 at 8:14 pm

        I love that she’s strong too. SuSu was too weak and victimized compared to BQ side in the drama.


    • Ana Korizma
      September 28, 2017 at 8:17 pm

      I also vote for 17 to keep her memories. The drama really messed up with the mortal Su Su when we compare her to Si Yin and BQ who were sassy, stubborn, pranksters and passionate. Su Su should be like her other 2 alter egos. If I was in Su Su’s shoes and know the selfish twat YH tried to take my eyes out or that concubine mishap, I’d make hell. Drama SuSu was too weak.


      • Vanessa Ly Kaiser
        September 29, 2017 at 8:48 pm

        All of you got it all wrong. Qing Cang made her the weakling. Y’all need to go back & watch that part again. Qing Cang said: I will make it so, that even you don’t recognize who you are. He did just that, he made her the opposite of herself.


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